Monday, February 25, 2008

Blue

Got the clues.
What about the mailbox?
Steve and the sweater.
Sidetable and note book?
Salt, Pepper, and paprika.
Soap cleans up the mess.
Which way did Blue go?

17 comments:

casey said...

I liked tis entry because u had very good detail.

Taylor said...

good poem because it gives good detail

Austin said...

I liked your writing because it actually made absolutely noo sense to me

Justina* said...

I liked this entry because I like gave you the idea :)

Emma said...

Brittany,
I really like this poem because it reminds me of when i was little. I used to watch Blue's Clues. Where did you get the idea of writing this from? I liked this also becuase it was very random. Keep up the good blogging!

-emma

Kate said...

I liked how you talked about allot of the characters because this way no one will get there feelings hurt!! haha jk! But it was pretty good!! Maybe you could write about Dora the Explorer next!! Or even The big comfy couch!
~Kate

gracefulswan4@hotmail.com said...

I liked this entry because it was very creative. I think you should write more of these poems. It made me laugh! :)! You should write more poems about different colors like green, pink, blue, red, purple, gold, and many other colors! LOL! Good job! Gracie

O Rock said...

I did not understand this at all. I still liked it though because of your uniquness in the writing. The words flow. Good poem Brittany. Keep on writing.

Lacy said...

Let me guess, Blues Clues. I liked your poem because of the way you incorporated a lot of things from the show. For example, characters, and like the notebook and stuff.I thought it was a really good poem. Keep up the good work:)

tommy said...

Nice poem! It was interesting because you came up with a poem that was based on blues clues. When did you come up with it? You should write more poems like this. Great job!

iZZY (iCeY) said...

Nice Brittany. This is really cute! I like this because you talked about Blue's Clues in a way we could all relate too as kids! Lol, descriptive too! But yeah in a way I can totally agree with Austin. But this is cool. Nice Job, keep it up!

garret said...

Brittnay that was amazing it blew my mind. I didnt really get it but still ya. I thought you really but your heart into it. the thing about the peppers nice. l liked it because it was individual.

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Layla said...

Blue's Clues! That show's amazing. I like this because you told about the random characters. (= Don't you just love Steve and that sweater.

Layla said...

Blue's Clues! That show's amazing. I like this because you told about the random characters. (= Don't you just love Steve and that sweater.

Will said...

Nice. I liked this because you had great detail on the blue of blueness. I'm pretty sure that the blue would go the with the salt and paprika.

Harrison said...

I liked this entry because it was very creative. I had a hard time understanding it the first time I read it. I liked how it was written. You must have put a lot of thought into this entry. Great entry.